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书面表达专练 主讲人 毛新东
Training (1) 1. 得知你二月份要来北京我很高兴。 I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing in February. 2. 我已经为你找到了地方。 I’ve found a place for you. 3. 房间面积 50平方米，带有卧室，洗澡间和厨房。 It’s a flat of 50 square meters, with a bedroom, a a bathroom and a kitchen. 4. 卧室里备有床，沙发，书桌和椅子。 In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
Training (2) 5. 月租三百。 The rent is 300 yuan per month. 6. 公寓在长安大街的一幢楼房中，离光明中学不远。 The flat is in a building on Chang’an Street, which not far from Guangming Middle School. 7. 一路车可以直接带你到校。事实上，只有两站路。 Bus No. 1 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only two stops. 8. 如果不满意，我可以给你另找地方。 If you are not satisfied with it, I can try and find another place for you.
Possible Version (3) Dear Bob, I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bed room there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far away from Jianxin Chinese School. But No. 11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua
Versions (4) 0分 Dear Bob, I ma is Lihua, I come from China, welcome you to di chins. I ma school is in fan Chao here. I live ph the fan Chao. They share one street. You to do I school sunter Chinese, you fan Chao moved in and gave the I school. I have you the home have a 25. 500 money 30 days. The yshare one street. A small airport and a few of television per day. Yours, Lihua
Versions (5) 1 -5分 Dear Bob, How are you? I received your letter and very happy. You please me help you a rom, which I was found. With you stermber to our city Jianxinhuawen school to study Chinese. The room on the Fangcao stret, enar you school a next. The room is three flood. Have a bed room, a Kitchen and toilt. The bed room has a bed and the desk fo your study, Behind, Kitchen and toilt savd, work the Chilt. I’m very happy you can Chinese study. The best wish to you! Yours, Li Hua
Versions (6) 6 -10分 Dear Bob, I hear that you will go to my school to study in sep. I’m very happy to heard it. And you asked me to found a house hearly the “Jianxing Huwen Middle School”, I have found it, it’s in the Fang Chao road. You can take a 11 bus arrived there. Now, I tell you something about the house. The houserent will cost you 500 Yuan every monthes, the house has 25 killmiters large, has three roms, such as, bedrom, chitherroom and bothroom, the room is very clean, has a chair, a table and a light, all of them are new one. In a word, it’s bery great, ithink you are like it. Last, I’m looking forward you and you all things best! Yours, Li Hua
Versions (7) 11 -15分 Dear Bob, I already found a flat fr you. It is on the Fangchao Street where near Jianxin Chinese school. The next bus stop of Fangchao Street is Jianxin Chinese school. I will tell you some information about the flat. There are four rooms, including a living room, bath room and a kitchen. In living room, you will use a sofa, a bed and a desk. And there are three doors to the bath room, kitchen and outside flat. All of above is the flat which I found for you. The house owner said the rent can be discussed if you want to live in. I’m look forward to your letter. Yours, Li Hua
Versions (8) 16 -20分 Dear Bob, I’m very glad to hear from you and I’m very happy to see you in September. I know you will study in Jian Xin Chineses schol, so I have already found a comfortable house near this school for you. In front of the house, there is a bus station and the No. 11 bus will take you to the school where you will study. In the house, you will feel very comfortable. In it’s the biggest room, there have a bed, a sofa, a desk and so on. The house also has a toilet and a kitchen. I think you will have a good time in it. At last, the house is not too big and the rent is 500 per month. I will wait for you in the city! Yours, Li Hua
Consolidation (9) 21 -25分 Dear Bob, How glad I was when I heard that you would come to Jian Xin Chinese school to study Chinese. I’ve found a house, which you’ve mentioned in your last letter. As was expected, it’s near the school where you’ll study. As a matter of fact, it’s by the side of the road where lies the No. 11 bus stop and the school is at the next stop. Let me tell you something in details about the house. For one thing, it’s large enough for a single person like you to live in. For another, it’s well equipped. Besides a sofa, a desk with a chair and a bed, there also a washroom and a kitchen. It’s 25 square meters with the rent of only 500 yuan each week. It never occurred to me that you would come to study with me. I’m looking forward to your coming soon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua